My Free choice writing

Mr Rices Holiday

In 16th January 2008

Mr Rice was waiting for his turn to throw the lucky dart in New Zealand. He plays it twice. He pays $120 for each dart. He threw the dart and it landed on $10000 cash then the next dart landed on a free trip of one month to the USA.

He boarded the ship called Syboney with his dog Fudge. When he was on the ship he ordered a pizza but he didn’t like it so he gave it to Fudge. Fudge spewed in someone’s bag. The lady screamed.

Someone is swimming and can’t come out of the water, so Fudge tried to help her. But the girl swimming has a picture of a girl dog on her swimming togs. So when they come out of the water Fudge bites her swimming togs.

They get off the boat and go to the bus but Mr Rice caught the wrong bus because it looked the same. He wanted go to Los Angeles but he went to New York. He thinks something is wrong so he tried again to go to Los Angeles but he went to Washington on the wrong bus again! He thinks something is wrong again so he tries again to go to Los Angeles. This time he got to Los Angeles but someone stole his money.

Fortunately he had $5000 left and he saw a wanted poster saying “If you catch Mr Elephant (he is a thief) we will give you $10000”. At the moment Mr Rice goes to jail because he looks the same as Mr Elephant. But he can get released because they check, check and check so they find out that he is not Mr Elephant. He went to some house and he found some guy that looks like Mr Rice so he thinks he is Mr Elephant. They fight and Fudge bites Mr Elephant bottom and they fight, fight and fight. Mr Rice looks like he is losing but an ant comes and Mr Elephant is so scared! Mr Rice won and he handed him to the police and he got $10000 reward money. Then he goes to Los Angeles beach and has wonderful day at Los Angeles beach.