Video Reflection-Daniel kang

video Reflection-Daniel kang

My Year 6 Reflection

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I had improved lots of things English,Maths,computer skills and lots of things more I had improved.
I think teachers are very kind so I like those teachers.
I like this school because we have to do some lots of activitys so it's so great.
My friends are kind so I played a lot.

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Some boys are very annoying so I want hate them.

Video Reflection-Daniel.k

I think I have improve about lots of things In Fendalton school, I think English, math and computer skills i have improved.
I like teachers Mr Clarke and Mrs Howison because they're kind but sometimes they're angry.
Different teachers are usually angry so I don't like those teachers.
I want to do lot of free choice writting and I want start do some have time for more Non-negotiables.

Inquiy Evalution-Daniel kang/Jun An -Movie

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1.We have make some movie and edit together so we have to work together so we're team player.
2.We have to talk a lot for making movie so we can make improve our English.
3.When we make some movie and edit it we have to think about tools so we are thinker.


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1.We have lot of opinion so we can have some fight.
2.Someone
going to put some bad songs and bad things do but he doesn't want make difference but we have to make it difference.
3. I think we need work on our team work because we
didn't listen some people some times and we were sometimes mucking
around and fighting over lines.

persuasive Essay

Dear Editor

Hello, my name is Daniel Kang. I want to persuade you to consider living in an under water house.

First, I think we could make a house that is from outside of the sea, so the air comes to the house. Some machines are in the house, they help to push the air, so it could come to the house. How about CO2? When CO2 comes to the CO2 cleaner, it goes back to the outside of the sea again.

Second, it’s about electricity, we could make hydro plants in the sea, so hydro plants will make electricity for things, but the problem is how is it
possible to get the power to the house? That’s easy, just like now, we could make electric poles in the sea. Usually we use lots of electricity so if there is not much electricity we could use some of the sun’s energy, solar power.
But if we have too much electricity we can't store it so we will have to make an electricity warehouse so we can store lots of electricity.


Next is about food, we would just have a machines to catc a lot of fish or marine products. The machine is able to kill and chop fish and machine cooks it so we just bring it to the table and we just eat it.

Next is about plumbing. I think it’s about how can use the sea water. The water comes into the house through the tunnel and into a water integer machine. The salt is then taken out so we can use it.
But how can make warm water? We just use the electricity so it can be warm.

Bye and Thank you for looking

From : Daniel kang