persuasive Essay

Dear Editor

Hello, my name is Daniel Kang. I want to persuade you to consider living in an under water house.

First, I think we could make a house that is from outside of the sea, so the air comes to the house. Some machines are in the house, they help to push the air, so it could come to the house. How about CO2? When CO2 comes to the CO2 cleaner, it goes back to the outside of the sea again.

Second, it’s about electricity, we could make hydro plants in the sea, so hydro plants will make electricity for things, but the problem is how is it
possible to get the power to the house? That’s easy, just like now, we could make electric poles in the sea. Usually we use lots of electricity so if there is not much electricity we could use some of the sun’s energy, solar power.
But if we have too much electricity we can't store it so we will have to make an electricity warehouse so we can store lots of electricity.


Next is about food, we would just have a machines to catc a lot of fish or marine products. The machine is able to kill and chop fish and machine cooks it so we just bring it to the table and we just eat it.

Next is about plumbing. I think it’s about how can use the sea water. The water comes into the house through the tunnel and into a water integer machine. The salt is then taken out so we can use it.
But how can make warm water? We just use the electricity so it can be warm.

Bye and Thank you for looking

From : Daniel kang

My Free choice writing

Mr Rices Holiday

In 16th January 2008

Mr Rice was waiting for his turn to throw the lucky dart in New Zealand. He plays it twice. He pays $120 for each dart. He threw the dart and it landed on $10000 cash then the next dart landed on a free trip of one month to the USA.

He boarded the ship called Syboney with his dog Fudge. When he was on the ship he ordered a pizza but he didn’t like it so he gave it to Fudge. Fudge spewed in someone’s bag. The lady screamed.

Someone is swimming and can’t come out of the water, so Fudge tried to help her. But the girl swimming has a picture of a girl dog on her swimming togs. So when they come out of the water Fudge bites her swimming togs.

They get off the boat and go to the bus but Mr Rice caught the wrong bus because it looked the same. He wanted go to Los Angeles but he went to New York. He thinks something is wrong so he tried again to go to Los Angeles but he went to Washington on the wrong bus again! He thinks something is wrong again so he tries again to go to Los Angeles. This time he got to Los Angeles but someone stole his money.

Fortunately he had $5000 left and he saw a wanted poster saying “If you catch Mr Elephant (he is a thief) we will give you $10000”. At the moment Mr Rice goes to jail because he looks the same as Mr Elephant. But he can get released because they check, check and check so they find out that he is not Mr Elephant. He went to some house and he found some guy that looks like Mr Rice so he thinks he is Mr Elephant. They fight and Fudge bites Mr Elephant bottom and they fight, fight and fight. Mr Rice looks like he is losing but an ant comes and Mr Elephant is so scared! Mr Rice won and he handed him to the police and he got $10000 reward money. Then he goes to Los Angeles beach and has wonderful day at Los Angeles beach.

letter to selfish

Dear Selfish giant

Hello Selfish. My name is Daniel kang I’m from Korea. I like this story because you’re a selfish so at last you are a good giant people loved you every one playing with to your garden.
It’s been very great story. And why are you selfish children like playing there and one day you have problem children can help with you. Think every day people loved you and you’re very happy

16.07.07
Daniel kang

Reflection - Maths

Reflection

Today I learned about math strategy. I can remember all but strategy has five but I for got 2strategys.The strategies name is Equal Addition, place value and conference and more but I for got. I for got 2 strategies but I’m very good at math so... It's OK

Hyeng Bu and Nor Bu (This is a korea story)

Long long time ago there was a man who had a lots of money and two sons. Their names were Hyeng Bu and Nor Bu. Hyeng Bu was younger. The two sons were very different and Hyeng Bu had lots of sons and Nor Bu had only one.

One day Nor Bu took lost all his money. Later one bird flew down on the ground. Hyeng Bu saw that the bird broke its leg. He helped it and the bird could fly. 1 year later that bird came and gave a piece of paper to Hyeng Bu. It had on it only numbers.

Later Nor Bu listened to strange music on the mountain. (Hyeng Bu live in this mountain).
He went and and looked. Hyeng Bu bought a lotto using the numbers the bird had given him and he came first. Nor Bu was very angry and he bought lots of lotto but didn’t came first.

Nor Bu went to Hyeng Bu’s house Hyeng Bu told him “the bird helped me.” Nor Bu then tried but he broke the birds leg and helped it but the bird only gave Nor Bu a bug. Nor Bu was very angry.

One day an old grandma‘s house was broken. Grandma saw the a house had money in it.
Nor Bu knew and he broke into his house himself but did not find money.

Nor Bu then went to Hyeng Bu house and they lived there very happy.